Gradual Depth 4

As a personal project, I have decided to take a simple sentence and gradually expand on it in an attempt to explain and eventually detail my educational beliefs. This project can be seen as a series of blog posts in the Gradual Depth series.

 

Previous

We are all born with a natural desire to learn. We should all embrace that desire. We should enable and assist the learning process of others and take responsibility for our own learning. We should try to avoid anything that could interfere with the right to learn.

 

Changes

At one point, I had two sentences. The last update expanded the first sentence. Now, I will update what was the second sentence (and now the last). For now, I’m embracing the same sentence pattern, which isn’t a good final read. The new text should reflect what can interfere with learning. I will probably address the wording in my next update.

“We should try to avoid anything that could interfere with the right to learn.”
is now
“We should avoid placing educational restriction on ourselves or others. We should not mistreat or discriminate against variable forms of learning. We should never tell others not to learn.”

Updated text

We are all born with a natural desire to learn. We should all embrace that desire. We should enable and assist the learning process of others and take responsibility for our own learning. We should avoid placing educational restriction on ourselves or others. We should not mistreat or discriminate against variable forms of learning. We should never tell others not to learn.