Thursday, November 28, 2013

Gradual Depth 3

As a personal project, I have decided to take a simple sentence and gradually expand on it in an attempt to explain and eventually detail my educational beliefs. This project can be seen as a series of blog posts in the Gradual Depth series.

 

Previous

We are all born with a natural desire to learn that we should strive to fill. We should try to avoid anything that could interfere with the right to learn.

Changes

This time, I decided to take the first sentence and expand. I also wanted to provide a little clarification that embracing the desire to learn doesn’t only reflect our own learning.

“We are all born with a natural desire to learn that we should strive to fill.”
is now
“We are all born with a natural desire to learn. We should all embrace that desire. We should enable and assist the learning process of others and take responsibility for our own learning.”

Updated text

We are all born with a natural desire to learn. We should all embrace that desire. We should enable and assist the learning process of others and take responsibility for our own learning. We should try to avoid anything that could interfere with the right to learn.

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