As a personal project, I have decided to take a simple sentence and gradually expand on it in an attempt to explain and eventually detail my educational beliefs. This project can be seen as a series of blog posts in the Gradual Depth series.
Previous
Those who want to learn should be allowed to do so with as little restriction as possible.
Changes
I need to deviate from the original text to minimize confusion with my defining beliefs. For that reason, I will try to reword and expand each of the two major segments into new sentences.
“Those who want to learn”
is now
“We are all born with a natural desire to learn that we should strive to fill.”
“should be allowed to do so with as little restriction as possible.”
is now
“We should try to avoid anything that could interfere with the right to learn.”
Updated text
We are all born with a natural desire to learn that we should strive to fill. We should try to avoid anything that could interfere with the right to learn.
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